Before this thread was cleaned Led had PMed will a peer to take Lady Fiyah off the voting counsel of this before he dropped and I took her place to disarray confusion
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Originally Posted by Triple_N
You must of forgot you wack due to too many bong hits
See, cuz a weed dependcy is only thing u gotta "deal wit"
Good personal could've been used better....but no punch....3/10
Claimin' u spray Sk's, I say its B.S., I know u ain't hoodin'
But ya lies bring tears to cosby's eyes......................
..........................cuz you proved "proof is in da puddin'"
Ok.....decent...4/10
Ya gurlish voice is a sign of u bein' in prepubescent grapple
Cuz at the dawn of man eve was led to eat "adams apple"
Wordplay is decent, but could've been done much better....4/10
Your verses is "2-pac's" & "ja-net" skillz ain't "jack-son"
U gettin' ate's "poetic joetice"...............................
......like bicuspids I mash Leftover Edible Delicates, dun
No....2/10
Plain & simpe u suck, it'd be dumb luck if ya made me duck
Do any ya punches take karate lessons? cuz "none-chuck"
Best line you had....6/10
In verses & real life u "stumb in da middle" ya prob lingers
Dats why throught out this verse I'm giving you "da finger"
Why did you quote this?? 3/10
RB prooved u a biter & I'm pose to believe a change in you?
Fuck dat! I'm a be cautious..................
.......& erase all my cpu cookies cuz u might bite those too
Good punch...good personal....5/10
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Triple_N's Overall Verse: 27/70
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You had alot of personals that just werent used good at all...you said he hurt his finger, but you didnt put much use of that....you just had alot of personals that you didnt use good...and you used alot of forced wordplay....try using wit and drop the quotes...
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Originally Posted by Led Posaken
Triple N?? I wont even ask how you got this far in this..
But how's it possible to have an ego bigger than ya sig
Decent personal.....ok punch....4/10
Wack fuck, he'll soon find out it's the win he's missin..
Kids breath is so bad, his audios come in mint condition
Heh....got a chuckle....5/10
I spread like a disease, so my fists'll spread on this bitch
Dumb fuck thought an infestation played today's top hits
Nice wordplay and good punch....6/10
I'll blow ya all apart, and leave nothin but steam and vapors
Whats worse is...
Ya verse has more quotes than my college English paper
Good punch.....ok personal....5/10
^That's a predetermined punch...I aint seen ya shit yet
And I aint talkin countries when your loss is easy Tibet
Best line you had....7/10
Master of punchlines? how can we respect your shit??
When his location isnt where he's from..it's what he is
Decent...I've seen some other disses to kats who live in queens...but still good...4/10
You fuckin drop garbage...and that's ya style bitch..
After I murder ya you'll feel at home...
Cuz I'll leave Triple.....N the fucking dumps as it is
Meh....probably played....seems like a rushed line but decent....4/10
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Led Posaken's Overall Verse: 35/70
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You had a pretty good verse for the most part....not much on personals, but better punches and better use of the personals you had...
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