ok first of all this was very emotional...and your vocab was decent and your stucture was there and flowed so well with a few good multis...a few lines that had a twist to them with wordplay....but most of all this shit was very emotional....keep goin i wanna hear you audio you would be tight...but still im wodering if this is true shit cuz shure sounds like it...i like it anyway...

9/10..honest