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Old 01-01-05, 08:26 PM   #77
Parallel
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Conclusion:
not bad i actually like your verse alot even tho the topic is played out n shit it was a tight verse you were creative and emotional...straight good...and pretty much mostly every guy can realate to this topic...and your vocab was tight and you were creat very well with wordplay and metaphores very witty..but i jsut tink you didnt come as hard as fianl did...no hate

Final:
damn you really elevating topicaly your probably better then me...your vocab was ery good and you worked very emtional in your verse...2nd of all you were also creative with the metaphores and wordplay i seen a few nice lines speically your opener very nice opener...you got this tho...very close battle hard choice...no hate to both pz...
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