L.E that verse was pretty good there was something i didnt like about it but i cant put my finger on it

My fingers touch the cold bar of steel...my pulse begins to quicken...
...A silent foot climbs on...the realization of urgency of my mission

that was your best bar good imagery and everything fell together well after this part... dope verse im gonna say youre in and once i find out what i wasnt feeling in your verse ill tell you and we can fix it to make your topicals doper

L.E youre in

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