aight i felt both peices lacked... but no hate to either of you...

George- overall a fair peice... not a huge fan of the structure... vocab was good... stayed on topic... overall a pretty good poem

King- good peice... ya had good structure, lower ya font a little tho man... ummmm... vocab wasnt all that hot tho and thats what lost if for ya i think... no hate dawg...

Vote- George