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Knock out kings fur life
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Voted For: 4fil
I felt a lil in this topical but no hate you had some good versus to. But his topical just spoke to me more and he had some good lines that I thought where iight and these are the lines that got my vote.
I sat on my bed, tears trickling down my eyes
Cold and lonely, suddenly I thought of suicide
My pride was low, then I thought of a new job
I picked up the news paper, and my eyes just stopped
On an article about a movie, I thought I could star in that
I got my hopes up, put the paper down on my lap
Imagined me as a super star, so I decided to go audition
Got the bus into town, and I was high off my ambitions
And I think he just played the topical well and you did to but just keep working on it peace. And hit up on my links please.
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