on other boards amazing how you guys don't feel this and other boards are

MADDRAPPER
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(12/27/04 6:25 pm)
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Girl to Girl

Oh MADD I have fake collisions so I make provisions
Like headquarters for misled daughters that go on missions
For sex met a girl with a wet world like mine the type fine
Booty round and brown like a basketball, boys out their mind
Drastic call for sex, they want desserts under her skirt
Because she wonder flirt butt when she strut so boys be so alert
When she walks by, one day in fun way she came to my home
The game was on started talking about the way boys do
Didn’t know she toys too, oh MADD she jest kissed my lips true
Couldn’t do anything I was so surprise another girl kiss like that
It was woman to woman oh she jest rub my thighs so phat
Oh that felt good oh she just got my tongue now she hold my hand
With a bold plan oh she jest put her hands under my skirt
So many coo-chee hairs in juicy pairs she pushed to the side to work
Her finger in my wet puff stuff she huffed in my ears OUCH! That hurt
We were tit for tit every bit hot oh this girl has twist my world heart perk
Boo what he do next? “He suck my breast nips oh she jest touched my bra
My breast hung and rest sprung protruding no alluding her so bazaar
Oh my nipples poking and smoking no joking I’m hoping I don’t know
Didn’t want her to go, oh if a man cum he would go crazy and throw
Juicy coo-chee everywhere he wouldn’t care period or not oh she
Tongue me lip lock both our hips hopped “oh I see why men be
Wanting you girl your true world lies in the pies of you coo-chee



Disillusioned
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(12/27/04 8:36 pm)
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"they want desserts under her skirt"

Eye loved reading this metaphor. Never hear it put that way before, poetic. I love sistas dessert under the skirt, what a beautiful thang, intriguing too, intoxicating too, jus like this poem.

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MADDRAPPER
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(12/27/04 10:47 pm)
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wow! thanks for the props for real

amberly1
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(12/28/04 12:52 am)
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i never heard it put that way before either, what makes this real, much felt, some really great lines going on here




KIIING
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(12/28/04 1:09 am)
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yeah... you penned a classic line with this one. you got your own style. it's hard for me to catch the flow the way it is written. but chances are i'd have to read it a couple times anyway so it doesn't bother me. once you get the flow of your pieces it makes them that much better.

MADDRAPPER
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(12/28/04 3:10 am)
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THANKS FOR THE PROPS FOR REAL YALL

Passionpoet1
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(12/28/04 3:50 pm)
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very interesting way of putting things...your metaphors were great...




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(12/28/04 4:00 pm)
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madd *falls out*
aight I'm up
this piece has me twirling over here lol
your metaphors friggin' rock
jeez u badd 4 real
love
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MADDRAPPER
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(12/31/04 9:27 am)
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all right so much love for this one HA! HA1 HA! THANKS FOR REAL


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