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Old 01-02-05, 03:01 PM   #14
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Nice drop, I was feeling Kilo's verse most. Get rid of the last verse, to me it throws off the mood and tempo. I can hear that on a cd, but you need to touch it up, the flow is perfect, you need a better 3rd verse. Put in a refrain and you've got a track for a cd.. px
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