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Voted For: HAZARD
hmmmmmmm i think hazard got this his punches were more on point in this battle and the vocabulary was that little bit better...
lines that won you the battle...
Shoot Ya Down From The Sky, Fat Bitch, You'll Fall Quick
"Punches" Land Repeatedly, Like Drunk Teen Alcoholics
Ya Scriptz Get Shrunk, So You'll Neva Make "Big Time"
A Candle With No Wick, see Your Verses Will Neva Shine
overally the battle was good but you need to spend more time on writing these to get the bigger advantage on your opponents... good battle no hate
return the favour links in the sig... pz.
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