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Old 01-02-05, 05:42 PM   #3
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ALL i gots to say welcome back and dope story script.




Nice multi'z, upp ya vocab a little. Flow was alright. Expressing it was good. The creativty of it, was good. I could picture that in my mind.

NICE DOPE STORY. 9/10

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