Voted For: Skriptz

Vote: Skriptz



Skriptz ill? .. This queer I'm erasin his fate..
..Put a 45 in his mouth & he still gettin' ate
structure fine, flow fine, just not a punch or diss - 6/10
You'll get left with bruises once my darts hit..
..& he's the ruler of the game, so I'm the yardstick
i know what you wanted to do but the ruler could be technically longer than yardstick lol - 6.5/10
Heat up your mind & put your brain in the oven..
..& take ya heart outta chest to show ya some lovin'
nice wordplay, gd flow, structure. just not a diss - 7/10
The text's speeding, Headed for ya dome & tips heating..
..& I'm writing in red..... Cos I left skriptz bleeding
maybe if u had changed the text colour dis cud hav been half dope, was ok, not too bad - 7/10

With lyrics you don't bite you nibble...I'll murk your ass for shits and giggles
This aint no riddle...a broke comedian cracks your jokers with scribbles
first half of bar was gd humour and nice flow, 2nd half werent feelin it, ok openr - 7/10
Herbs like you are just like a virus' putting our computers at risk
You'll never have my talent, even if you put my verse on a disc
gd diss, nice concept, decent bar, nice punch -7.5/10
And believe me, I dont really want no beef so dont get mad
Take your period out on someone else, preferably your dad
meh.........nuttin special...ok filler -7/1o
Structure is the wackest part of ur verse..wordplay in ur
rhymes is missin
This kid thinks he's Suga Ray...nah, thats just sugar lines you spittin
nice humour, gd simile, nice and creative - gd closer -8/10

RTF - link in sig. ~1~

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