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01-02-05, 09:03 PM
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Kawn Flixx
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pleas e fix the strucutre
you striked some interesting points in here
flow was sort of aight..lil streched..add a bit more multis in this
and it'll turn out ok..you can edit
but i give it a 7/10
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