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Old 01-02-05, 09:03 PM   #7
Dex
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Voted For: Damian

One sided.

open: Damian:"I'll merk you bad like Rosie O'donnel trying to get her baby back
Putting yourself down without even trying,claming that your wack" -Much better. Use of the meta and a harder hitting punch

close: I honestly didnt like any of those closes at all. Honestly Damian you could av done better than that. If the end rhyme was better tho it would have been damian.

Armada's best bar: "Of wat i could make out of that verse this was the best: "Dont worry damian dis battles barely begun/ the only nine u eva packed is a "5 n 4 ones!"/" -This was not good at all but the best in his verse. Honestly bro i dont mean to hate so much but you should just leave now and never look back.

Damian's best bar: "de day later asked his father to go back again,he told him to ask his mother
He ran up and ask and begged the slut telling that he would fuck her" - Was the best done i think. Your only problem was the lack of rhyming Damian. Not that it was a bad verse but i just feel it more wen it rhymes more.

Armada
Overall Armada's verse was really not appealling to me. I thought the flow and structure had gone completely out the window and he just thought fuck it il write til i stop. -Dont fly bro. apologies..

Damian
Damian your verse was good, good punches and quite entertaining but just try and get the rhymes flowing more.
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