Voted For: X-Spitty

breaks down like this:

open: Damian: "First of all...let me give you some tricks,use your imagination
Cuz Your wacker than making a guitar talk like Peter Frampton" - This was a funny opener. clever. Other guys open was weak as fuck aswel.

close: Damian: "so i could see you suffering,bleeding,almost an orgasme
but fuck up cuz i woke up and you were still standing tere like trash" -I liked this. Thenm i read it again and liked it more. good vocab and some anger in that, but not an excessive amount. Its cool

Lil D's best bar: didnt fucking have one. Shit man you are making hard for me to not make this a hate verse. The only reason im taking my time on this is to make sure that with verses like that people realise they cant win in RV or any fucking rap site. It didnt even look like poetry.

Damian's best bar: "Hey people look at me! im with stupid....just like static-x
last night i made a dream about you having a bullet in your neck" -This was cool, bit of aggression in there we like to see. Keep up the elevating bro and you'll get real good

overall wat can i say? Lil D's verse (if you can call it that) had no structure or flow and i didnt read a punch, rhymes scheme, metaphor or any shit like that at all

Damian good verse. Entertaining and aggressive. Well played

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