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Voted For: Archeologist
ok battle
punches- Arch, more creative and harder hitting. Kord, ok punches, work on bein creative and not usin played punches.
personals- Kordo, mostly for havin more of em. Work on ya material though. Arch, have more personals.
metas- Kordo, for having them, not really that strong. aight though. Arch, didnt have em from what i saw.
multis- Kordo, for more of em. arch, good, but not enough.
word play- Arch, good wordplay, try to have more though. Kordo, work on wittier wordplay and better too.
flow- Arch, flowed a lot easier, didnt fall off except for the last line. Kordo, work on ya flow, fell off a couple of times.
structure- Arch, easier to read, and not many stretched lines. Kordo, ok structure, work on stretched lines.
humor- Arch, had me laughin.
Arch, not a bad drop. Work on more personals, and some more wordplay.
Kordo, work on your punches, and your material for personals. Try better wordplay as well.
No Hate Just An Honest Voter
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