-thought it was dope how u made it like s/he could smelllt the addiction
-unlike sum, i dnt think poetry ever has 2 rhyme, in fact if it doesn't it seems more real and less manufactured if u get me
-nice level of vocab 4 theme
-keep em coming man
-dnt worry if Intellectual thoughts is gd 4 anythin its 4 gettin fbak on poems n shit

P.S :::thanks 4 closin that mofo.........lol

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