I walk & walk over you
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Voted For: C.A.L.I
Yo fuck this lame bastard - Doomsday's famous from Rap World.
While your name backwards alone is tellin me that you lack words.//
I smack herbs - don't let SHIT slide - leave dudes broke in two.
While you were busy convincing them to cockslide and vote for you.//
Your biggest fan is Dopium man – and you stepping to me??
Said it your self Can’t Assemble Lyrics Intellegently.//
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^Ok nice personals, with punches. Good wordplay. Elevate much more on punches fam. Kinda came weak. personals was nice though. flow was good.
You rap's 'bum' you should write rhymes on a park bench
Well since you 'Doomsday'....i guess my lines is like Clark Kent!!
Since you 'D.C' no chance you could 'Marvel' the crowd
Ya punches like cheap dish soap.....watered down!!
Ya lines bout as 'Common' as that dude in ya avy
Cuz the 'Aftermath' is that ya chances 'Slim'mer then 'Shadys'
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ alright, good punches. nice personals. Flow of it was nice. Punches were good and decent. Personals Was good.
overall= This battle was close, nice flow from both end, and personals. The thing i look in a battle is who has more effective punches. Doomsday you had good punches, but still elevate. Cali your punches was decent and more hard hitting never "GLORIFIED" your self in your verse. Doomsday you'd did glorified yourself in the first line of your verse. That dont mean your punches wasnt hard hitting. I felted cali came harder with the punches with soem good personals too. Doomsday your punches was good, but i felted cali just came a little harder.
peace
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