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Voted For: Necro Pyronix
Im out to shock, out to rock out to put you on the hot spot,
You can play TWISTER and i'll still put you into tighter knots,
Kids playin himself wit a name like Necro Pyronix,its ironic, but i'll have an insight to your mind like you were microscopic
in reality i would send u a free visit to the Orthodontics,
kid before this battle started you already lost it.........
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ alrighty you had some punches, they "eh" okay. flow was a lil chopped up. Elevate on soem punches a lil more and your struture ok.
This New Zealend Fuck, Think's He Can Exeed All Expectation's?
Of What Kid? Receiving Grade-A Wackness Result's In That Operation?
I Spit Molten Magma Bar's, That Digest & Shrivel Ya Half-Assed Word's.
With a Rec Like That Woulda Xpect The L's From Vet's....
But In Battle Stat's They Were All From Herb's!
What Kinda Cat Spell's His Name Like That, Or Was You Baffled from Birth?*
New Zealend Sheep-Shagger's, Don't Have Kangaroo's? Well I'll Have Ya Reeling Ta Perth!**
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ okay, nice punches and good personals too. The flow of it was good. The personals of it was good. Punches hit hard.
overall=This goes hands down to necro, no beef, but necro had some harder punches and plus some personals. Which (x) didnt have any personals. You had punches but the punches was weak, need elevating. Use personals in your verse. I felted necro punches came harder, than (x)....
peace
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