well This is what I Think

Flow Intellegent
Your Openin was kinda weak but you Made up for it in the 3-4 bars id say So I really ignored that ........Your vocabulary was decent nothing that i had to go look up LOL so it was dcent........You Overall Topic Covering was Aii You stayed on topic except for on one bar But Still I Sort of seen Where It mixed wit the topic so i let it slide ........Overall You Did Good your structure was nice and Well Basically You did good so You get A
8.5/10

Whyte Ave
Your Opening Was very Basic I was expecting Alot more better opening from you but anyways . you had a Decent drop Um ......You did seem as if you cut yo lines short and thats what hurt you the most ...it seems like you were rushing and that really messed you up. You sort of fell off topic but you still came dcent your Vocab Wasnt Good But whos is? LOL j/k....Overall I think You need to Slow it down Next time and make A poem That will catch the Readers Attention I Give you a
6/10