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Old 01-03-05, 08:10 PM   #15
50hater_killer
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Voted For: C.A.L.I

Cali gets this and that is simple and here is why. His verses where better he had better strucutre his rhyming was better. He had more multis more vocabs and more harder hits and his closure to his opener was fantastic and here is my grading.


You rap's 'bum' you should write rhymes on a park bench
Well since you 'Doomsday'....i guess my lines is like Clark Kent!!
Since you 'D.C' no chance you could 'Marvel' the crowd
Ya punches like cheap dish soap.....watered down!!
cali u get 10/10 on this one homes but keep it up


Yo fuck this lame bastard - Doomsday's famous from Rap World.
While your name backwards alone is tellin me that you lack words.//
I smack herbs - don't let SHIT slide - leave dudes broke in two.
Doomsday keep elevating homes and play ur vocab more 5/10.

hit up on my links please peace.