Vote : Flow Intellligent

Flow:
Disagree with Dipset i liked your opening bars.........most ppl are afraid to come across with a bit of wit in poems when they write them assuming that 24/7 poems have to be sombre and serious so i like the confidence to go with the wit man.......vocab was well used and not over-done...your topic coverage was aight a few places where you came off topic and went off but it didnt damage ur drop too much...structure was on point.
best bars:
Feelings and emotions are bundled closely together
If its raining outside, words stay hidden from weather
Softly behind my skull, On the crevices of my mind
And no matter how hard i try, Im always out of time

whyte Ave
I liked ur poem overall but at the end of the day it was very basic..you didnt attempt anything if u feel me..you came at the topic and just basically described the topic there was no reflection in your drop....vocab was fine could be a lil more elevated in places...structure was fine....There was nothing wrong with your poem basically you just need to be more creative
best bars:
With each decision, doors open while others close
Do I leave for school in the states and try to expose
Myself to pro scouts, with that I have my doubts
If they would notice me, plus there’s other routes

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