Vote: Dipset:
yo dis shit was a unpredicted upset in my opinion..........King dipset came strong wid a deep ass poem

GKStanza
-topic coverage was not very good i dont feel, id say 70% on topic and the rest was sort of floating around it
-good vocab used it well and in the right places where it was needed
-structure on point
-flow, it flowed nicely-imagery: u didnt really create much imagery in a lot fo your lines.try for more of this
-emotion: alot of emotion in this piece,, on point
-best bars:
by gaining that empty feeling
because trust is one commodity
that's lost beneath the stealing
revealing all you thought to be
^^dope

-overall-8.5/10

King Dipset
-topic coverage: id say 95% of ur drop was on topic, so well done, u barely fell off at all
-very good vocab, shows a lot of elevation in you aswell, - liked the repitition of scatters in your piece made it more emphatic
-structure was uneven..try and work n this
-flow-ur verse flowed really well, thats why i didnt criticise ur structure 4 being uneven as despite that it stll flowed well
-imagery: a lot of vivid imagery created by the description in ur lines
-emotion:decent...try and work more, the 1st half of ur drop was really emotional it then declined from there
-best bars:
Scattered Pieces Of life, Scattered Pieces of Death
My Scattered Pieces Of Birth, Are the only scattered pieces thats Left
As I Look Upon The Broken pieces of my Self pride
And Notice Only Disrespect and Hate That Noone can Hide
^^dope

-overall-9/10 well done..drop like dis nxt week man

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