quality on the hook could be a little better....something sounds off, but it fits the beat real nice......first verse.....flow is shaky, seems like you odnt have very good breath control, work on that, lyrics are "ok", nothing special really....but not bad...delivery is decent, but needs some improvement, try to make people believe what your saying, you kinda sound like your just reading off of paper or somethin.....

2nd verse...is dude like 12?...lol, flow is ok....not to many falloffs....deliver is ok, but to be honest im not believin these lyrics just cuz of his voice, thats just my opinion, im not sayin its impossible...lol...but whatever, decent verse homie...



decent track yall....both need some improvements but thats the point of spittin, find where u need to elevate...



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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=169832