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Old 01-04-05, 04:38 PM   #7
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Voted For: SKAAL

you skills is ejected and ya flow is on time~out/
you aint "unknown" it's just nobody cares enough to find~out/
i'll hit ya light switch burnin ya "shine~out"/
and leave this kid "buried alive" now way to climb~out/
i aint even worried i peeped this guys rhymes~out/
his tracks couldn't "make noise" played in a "mimes~house"/
you've been dimed~out, i know~ya~weakness~chump/
basically everything hip-hop you holdin~tha~bleachers~up/
you whack as shit i can't openly~speak~enough/
i'll break ya spirit put ya soul~in~a~fecal~cup/(shit sample cup)
so what now mister cashville ten~a~key/
i could have two feet in a casket you couldn't finish~me/
rap "barry bonds" i'm "juiced" you can't injure~me/
you gotta 6 bar max my potential is infinity/
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ nice kid. Nice wordplay, with some punches. Punches were "eh" ok. Flow was nice.





I thought my battling was ova but, now you askin fo more
Skaal you lil punk ass nigga it's tyme to settle tha score,
I tried to leave shit alone an stay out tha race
but sence you wanna battle me I gotta put chu in yo place,
See I'm distraught an I'm very unpredictable
an you not so I know you ain't invincible,
Man it gets hot when you off up in this fukin field
so watch yo mouth or you's a done da da done deal,
Now wait a minute cuz you don't know what you're up against
I'm a king in tha south up north you jess a fukin prince,
Battling me I hope yo rhyme is intact
cuz I'm a battle you like they battling in Iraq,
An if you wanna get physical I can go biblical
Make 1 shot to yo temple an now it gets critical,
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ nice flow fam. Punches werent that great. Wordplay i sense a little of them in your verse.




overall= close battle but i gots to go wtih skaal. Unknown- your punches were kinda played too basic with no creativity meaning no wordplays. Skaal, i sense your punches with wordplays and meta'z, great putting them together making it an decent punch. so i give this to skaal for harder punches with some wordplay,and decent meta'z


peace
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