seems frimiler how ever you spell it but:

ok hmm that was tight i like your few last lines there....they were done well with vocab and your stucutre was tight....nicly flowing...maybe use multis give it mad flow i wanna do them to but its hard...but yea keep it up you had some good drop here...maybe we should collab i hear you got audio so we should do somin...but for your topicals keep it up your pretty skilled...8.4/10

look for my topicals i might throw them in my sig again but yea Unsuitable Life..check it if possible