omg acuity that was a fucking emotional drop the words metas and shut was crazy especially in the end where you told how long it would last this was fucking dope as fuck herehow from the first line you just built up to flames shit brought a tear to my eye fo real was a deep emotional topic. good vocab good imagery everything but emotion wins poetry battles in my eyes you gave a vivid emotional drop this is probaly in the top ten poetry shits i ever read dopeness word a 10/10
lyric lmfao dope fucking story and madd orginal too good vocab good imagery also very very creative also this was a dope drop as well real dope here nice story i could see shit going down it shouldve been longer though much longer cuz it kinda cut the impact down of the shit it was dope but lacked one key element that ac had and that was deep emotional attachment which love is and thats why i think he had a better poem a 7.8/10

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