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Better than you..
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not bad shit bro. definately sense some wu-tang inspired lyric style. the way u use multis and language reminds me of wu-tang a bit. nice topic u used but i think u could have delivered it better. i didnt really get a message out of this. you should try to get a message across with everything u write not just use words that rhyme to set a scene but yeh you did good here.
7.5/10
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Spit it from the heart, spit a thousand darts, split ya head apart…
Emcees depart, like rubin carter my hurricane left u scarred…
Like a spiked bat grammatical bar, like a wonderland drug…
Tumble - ing like a flagon of rum and 2 blunts, like the funk baby…
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