Your rhyming was actually decent, and you kept an ok structure together. Your flow was not to bad, and you got your point across.

Now read this, click the links, and laugh at a herb, for what you wrote just fit in amazingly well to what your about to see.

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...t=166416&page=2

That's the om I dropped.

Below is an incredibly retarded persons response. Dont' worry keep reading yes, it gets better.



Now it may look like I have bit it, but OH NO! I actually wrote it.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...=Insect+Society

I'm Given Light off rb, and he bit my om, for his battle. If you need proof look at the dates. I DROPPED my verse in august.
His THREAD was OPENED in september.

So instead of Giving feedback, make fun of this fucking retarded herb for accusing me of biting. When he bit off me, than trys to bust my ass for it.