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Old 01-04-05, 11:07 PM   #13
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Voted For: Wack Method?

wack gets my vote homes no hate I think his flow was much better it was easier to understand and he had a better structure here is how I graded the top rhyming scheme.

wack

Don't Let The Name Deceive Joo, Coz I'll Strip Your Bar's.
Evaporate Your Spotlight, & Disperse To Ya Face,300 Ninja Star's.
The Dude's A Dirty Bastard, That's Why His Family Disowned Him.
Fool's So Gay, He Rimmed A Tramp For a $1, & Didn't Even Cringe!
Rhyme's Stink, Flow Stink's Basically Ya Whole Act Is Gay.
Call Yourself A (W)rapper? When I Literally Throw You Away?
Unload Bar's To Scar Your Frame, & Deliver Yo Fuckin' Ass.
Think You A Contender? This Verse Destructin' Ya Career, BLOW!!BOOM!!FAST!
I Dont Really Need To Ask Bruh, How Stale You Are Dirty..
9.9/12

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welcome to muh centa
hunnies fill me deep in they placenta
cold as tha pole in tha winta
far from the intenta
but i got dis rap shit sowedn when muh gat unload
i guarentee it gon hit ya
instead of makin hos suck muh dick up
5/12 keep elevating homes

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