Voted For: Nostradamus

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Best verse i have seen from you yet... I like the way you say how life is a game, and you really did well to stay on topic with that... A few of the lines could have rhymed better like the one with gain and fabricate, and the main thing is that i really didn't feel a lot of emotion... Add that and it's almost flawless...

Nostra/

Felt a whole lot more emotion in this verse... Like how it seemed like you went through this and it was definetly a good story to go with the topic... Nice multies in there also...

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