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L.E
From: Edmonton, Alberta, Canada |
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Hmm...insanely close battle...
Final...you had a nice vocab, nice flow, nice structure...nice metas...I didnt really feel any imagery comin from ya...couldnt really picture anythin'...you stayed on topic, but it sounded like a report to me...learn to use more imagery and try to have a story...that is what makes a dope topical...not bad, just elevate...7.5/10...
Authentik...nice imagery...ya rhyme scheme was off a bit in places, but you had a story, and a nice imagery that kept flippin images in my mind...decent vocab, decent flow and structure...what got me was the imagary...damn...the story was good, and I liked your perspective...in my eyes, you get this...close as fuck tho...8/10...
Vote- Mista Authentik...
...No hate.
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