the best battle of the week

acuity
as usual you had an acceptionally decent drop,the imagery was decent not the best ive seen from you though,the emotion was good,you had some stretched ass lines...but it was coo,the vocab was actually okay in this,aswell was you word use,also your poem flowed decently,overall not a bad piece man 7.5/10

lyric
you had a dope poem man ,the imagery was outstanding in my view it was quite vivid,the vocab and word choice was nicely done,the structure was nice even tho it does not matter in a poem,and you flowed acceptionally well,the emotion was raw at every aspect,overall this was a nice read......8.5/10

overall both had some nice reads,both did really good in imagery,but ima say lyric had slightly better vocab and raw emotion so this battle goes to him.......PROPS TO BOTH IN THIS BATTLE,THIS IS BY FAR THE BEST BATTLE OF THE WEEK

v/lyric

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