Omen, ok flow, line up dubs better and get a pop filter to smooth out the mic catchin your breath, ok stuff tho

hook, decent, starts out a lil weak but it's solid

20, ok verse, work on your breath control so you can say more than a few lines at a time instead of record each set on top of each other, it works good sometimes but it took away on this song,

Omen, pretty much same as first verse, flow's a lil bit better, but yeah work on gettin a filter in front onf your mic.