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Old 01-05-05, 01:54 AM   #11
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Voted For: Nostradamus

hmmm wow good battle

says how dope the jury really is

final - i felt you had some strong lines in her,as far as imagery your were decent...you could of did more with this topic,the emotion was okay,the vocab was quite good i must say,a nice structure with a smooth flow helped out alot,and the way you took to the topic wasn't bad.......7/10

nostradamus-i liked the storyline in this piece,you had basic vocab but it was okay,the rhyme scheme was decent,you flowed just about right,your structure and format was clean,i was loving the imagery you portrayed,the emotion was cool,but like a said the story line won it for you in this because you came quite creative and dropped acceptionally well.........8.5/10

overall u guys are both dope as fuck and im glad your in my crew but yeah read my feedback cus it explains who won this and why.......VOTE: nostradamus
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