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Old 01-05-05, 02:06 AM   #12
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A'ight...in all honesty this was a fuckin' one sided battle...Final...you came pretty damn good...nice flow, emotion was lackin, imagery was a'ight...vocab was nice, but you really didnt have a point to yours...it seemed off topic...no worries jus keep elevatin and you'll do fine...

Nos...nice shit...wow...imagery, story, emotion...vocab...flow was off in places, structure a bit uneven...but wow, imagery and story...whew...straight fuckin fire here...nice shit...you get this for an overall better piece...no hate...peace...
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