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Voted For: Socrates
aight you where that much better........
other guy.... no punches that actaully hit.....no personals that axtually where nice.....no metaphores....no nothing....you need to elevate alot more......i wasnt feeling how oyu centered everything becuase you most likly had stretched lines.........just work on metaphores and perosnals.......then after you got that down...tehn work on punchlines and vocab......btu other than that you where good......
SOC: aight you killed this kid.................that siggy line was nice....that armageddon line was a lil streched......but it was nice...i have seen alot better form you though...also try and work on your vocab......and metaphores.....adn also a lil on your punches...but you got good personals........nice spit...
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