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Bangs like bikini attol
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Voted For: Phantom
Aiight to be honest soc even though text is wack, you are pretty good at it.. This was a good battle, I'll start with anxiety. Bro your verse was better than a lot of kids on this site I'll give you that, but some of the punches didnt hit as well as they should of, heres an example:
Kids only half me... So every time i try to see him i gotta double back.
Only time he pops up in convos... Is when he's jumpin on bubble wrap...
That punch was a little weak for an opener, the multi was there, but it didnt really pay him out at all.. If someone used that against me I'd be like... meh.. Your second line was a little better, but could of been worded better if you had of maybe givin reference to pop lotty and made a punch with that.. 3rd punch I actually had no idea what you were talking about, and it wasnt till your last 2 punches where I was like o word this is picking up.. But I think it was a case of too little too late..
Soc, I dont have much to say because your better than me at text I think.. But I actually enjoyed reading your punches which is something that doesent usually happen when I read text verses on this site.. I might start voting on your battles more often..
Good shit..
Peace all..
And sorry anxiety, I think you were out done here, but keep at it and keep reading verses like the one soc dropped cause thats the best way to elevate.
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