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Old 01-05-05, 12:36 PM   #13
Hammer
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This was feedback posted for C-Bo

IP:

Shit I wrote this and dont have enough posts. It will have to be feedback:

good battle. I enjoyed this. Good to read and entertainng from both.

C-Bo: It was a good opener and you knew it. I think you probaly thought of it and was quite happy, hence mentioning it tn the next line. Good use of metas and the personals were good. The hard hitting punches clinched it tho. They were on another level. "have him 'twitchin his leg' in defeat like watchin a 'rabbit in heat'..." -This was my fabourite line, it was totally mad. If it was some of the cats i seen on this site, you would have beaten them with just that line.

Preminition: I liked your opener aswell, hard hitting and personal to the core. This battle had some great openers and i couldnt say whos was better. The close was good aswel but to be honest i wasnt feelin the middle as much as the open and close and that was why i thought you lost cos C-Bo's middle was really good and yours was mediocre. No hate to you tho fam, i just think you came out a little weaker and C-Bo is good anyway, we have seen this a lot.