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Old 01-05-05, 04:43 PM   #9
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vote drama...good battle

beginning/ending-drama,i thought both beginnings and endings were great but i gave drama this because hers felt more complex and spiced up it had a good transition from beginning to end, but valor did nice on this as well

emotion-drama, to me this is one of the biggest parts depending on the topic...i thought drama came more emotional valors story felt kind of like ive heard it before...there was a lack of vocabulary that could of explained things more in your verse and get your heart out but i just felt drama had this more...

vocab-drama...thought she had more drama multies were a great addon too...

in the end i vote drama...it just seems like she tried a lot harder to win this and felt she wanted it a lot more...your verse was good valor but it didnt have as much as dramas in a lot of categories and felt like something written at the last minute
no hate good luck to both

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