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Old 01-05-05, 05:20 PM   #10
....Gone....
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Voted For: Usual

It's incompatible knowledge I spit is radical
you wanna battle bitch this ain't no talent show,
I done did tha thing now I'm a vet. in tha game
tha way I spit I eat tha words up like Hannibal mane,
I'm bound to maintain live struggled servived game
fuk da fame I ain't gotta mention yo name,
Haters don't do anything but bitch an come plain
battlin is tha situation dat'll get chu outta tha game,
In my forces I'm walkin you battlin I talkin
my guns gone be sparkin leave yo body in a coffin,
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ Weak fam. Hardly threw any punches, stop glorifying yourself. You had flow. No wordplay, hardly threw any punches, No personals either.




TU's name's correct, possibly cause your attribute's ain't wortha mention.
I'ma verbally discourage him, like teacher's yelling at retarded kid's in detention.
Textual interaction is ya downfall cos you wallow in my shadow.
Shit, i knew your rhyme's were weak, but no one expected they'd land mallow.
How can you be on the straight path? when naturally you were born bent.
There's many word's to describe your wackability,Like u "Blow" like hyperfan air vent's
^t^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ Nice wordplay with some punches. Personals (dissing his name) was good.





overall= This battle is kinda one-sided, T-U you was glorifying yourself instead of throwing any punches, you had flow, hardly no punches with no wordplays with no doubt of an personal in your verse.Stop glorifying yourself and focus of throwing punches at your opponent. Usual- nice verse with some wordplay and some punches i did sense a little of an personal in your verse. I have to go with Usual with this one because he actually threw punches instead of glorifying himself.

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