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Whyte Ave.
Vocab, flow n structure were all tight, no bad comments on that whatsoever. Emotion and imagery was real good in your drop and i LOVED the twist in the end and the way you approached the topic...solid drop for real! Not wack at all!
Acuity
Vocab, flow n structure were tight just like cat you're up against. Imagery n wordplay was real good but emotion was bit less in my opinion. You told the story in a vivid way and i liked it but i just felt like there could've been bit more emotion into it but overall very nice drop too!
My vote goes to Whyte Ave. but it was really close...vocab goes to Acuity for sure but was feeling more emotion into Whyte Ave's drop...no hate...close, real good job of both!
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