Bright rays shine through the bedroom window
The sight of the light, has my face in the pillow
My skin is a pale white and my head continues to pound
Still taste what I drank last night, as I begin to look around
Trying continually to re-trace my steps from yesterday
Entire memory’s been erased, my minds in disarray
Mass confusion surrounds my discoloured face
Try to pry a memory but this headache takes its place
I shut my eyes, looking for a summary of last nights events
Travelling through foggy skies, I only find blurred contents
Finally rise out of bed, notice my sight is obscured
Two black eyes and I’ve wondered what I’ve endured
The phone rings, my best friend on the other end
He says I have to confess, and he’ll be there to lend
A helping hand, my mind’s driven further into
The depths of confusion and sirens come to view
Police cars outside my house, calling for me
They place me under arrest for first degree
Murder, but I can’t recall any of the crime
But I’ll be able to remember in twenty years time
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ On the real fam this was an solid drop, i flet you had more imaginary than expreessing which its cool. Vocab was good. The creativity was tight and nice.




One day in a china town I got up with my life stripped from me
The only thing I have is my alias on a dogtag written Acuity
I sometimes get flashbacks and visions to the war's brutalities
I'm haunted by them and the psychedelic, tripping sights of human debris
When I dream I'm haunted by faces rushing across my screen
Unkown smiles and waves, they strangers scaring me like banshees
Since that fatal flight plunged and left me with these deformities
I have lost to the wind memories and recognition of previous realities
All those stories of old vacations and situations are now fallacies
Only reason i know is due to stories told by those surrounding me
Ma cerebellum and bank of memory on scan is stricken with abnormalities
My days, my proclaimed life with my friends is simply a formality
The heart-wrenching thing, is the misplaced past with my family
No longer do I know who or where they are, there simply photographic entities
I can sit, try and remember my people but the is truth forever eluding me
I never have a moments peace of meditatative beautiful harmony
Because Im constantly racking my thoughts, looking but failing to see
A black vortex, television fuzz, with an epic buzz like a swarm of african bees
I light inscence every day, open up the bible, and pray to the lord by my mantel piece
Pleading, Begging, Yearning for him to simply give back my forgotten memeories
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ Chea nice fam like Drama Queen said, solid drop with some wordplays and rhyme. Good flow, nice vocab too. The creativity was good. The part when expressing, you came a little weak and no hard on it fam


overall= this goes to white ave for my emotions and expressing it. No hate to acuity but i felt your verse with less emotions and expressing. Both tooked everything in a topical category but the one difference in this battle was expressing and emotions and white ave took that category. peace no hate.

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