yo big props, I was surprised... dj: you have great lyrics in the song, the way you put your words together emphasizing for rhyme, the only problem is you didn't deliver it with enough strength in your words... try and over-pronounce your words more to really make good use of all the rhymes your writing into the track, and maybe put more diaphragm into your delivery so it sounds like you really feeling yourself, so the rest of us can too... good shit though keep dropping. ecko: flow sounded good but quality lacked here, kinda hard to make out- but your style sounds like its heading in good directions... keep em comin- 1

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