Voted For: Pleim

YoungSoulja

i stand tall and crush you wit er'step of verb/
you pickin up a mic iz futile,like MJ askin out a girl/
^decent opener i guess

welcome to mah world where da greatest survive/
da lord you might wanna ask to yo inurbane flow to
revive/
^bleh @ first line, second is okay

i see it through yo words dat you prespirin'/
now stop bein scared cuz yo fluids is leakin all over
RV's wirin'/
^ok...

go ahead,call me a bully,but really im da commander in cheif/
you still think ders a god,den how come you just changed to no religous belief/
^nah, wasn't feeling your opener

First of all, fix your structure, up your vocab and i wasn't really feelin your flow. Didnt have any really hardhitting punches or personals in ya verse,some stuff didn't even make sense whatsoever but here and there you got shit that could be good so keep on doing your thing and elevate.


Pleim

Youngsoulja please, man look, you are as whack as can be
But what you need to under-stand, is that you stand-under me
^uhm,wasn't feelin the under-stand/stand-under-thing
but other thn that, decent...

After this battle everyone is his crew will be saying they miss him
Cuz with his whack ass record even the system couldnt a-system
^could've finished better

Look at this as learning you are simply and obviously worse
Even if you posted in Member Mugshots, noone woulda picture verse
^good one

Look man, what i do and what i did is considered quite a sin
you dont post with a countdown to drop, thats when you'll lose again
^okay closer

Structure and flow were definately better thn the other cat, vocab was okay...Didn't really have bold personals in there but you tried harder to bring him down with good punches. Keep on battling and read sum other stuff to help you out maybe.

No hate but my vote goes to Pleim

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