Gods Of War! -yeah im one
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Voted For: Pleim
this was an entertaining battle, and thats being kind i think. The potential is there with both ya but there is some serious elevating to be done.
Pleim's best line: "After this battle everyone is his crew will be saying they miss him
Cuz with his whack ass record even the system couldnt a-system" -Good wordplay and good punch.
Pleim's worst line: "Look at this as learning you are simply and obviously worse
Even if you posted in Member Mugshots, noone woulda picture verse" -Maybe i didnt get it but i thought this was quite weak.
youngsoulja's best line: "i stand tall and crush you wit er'step of verb/
you pickin up a mic iz futile,like MJ askin out a girl/" this was ok i guess. bit of a metaophor going on and quite a good punch
YS's worst: "i see it through yo words dat you prespirin'/
now stop bein scared cuz yo fluids is leakin all over
RV's wirin'/" -an attempt at a metaphor but no quality in this really, punch was weak and failed to hit.
Overall Pleim's verse was a lot better. His use of wordplay was good and well-noticed and his punchlines were more clever and harder hitting. YoungSoulja may have had a bad battle but he will get better.
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