Voted For: Premanition

Vote: Prem

Final:
Goos drop, gd vocab, on point structure and it flowed really well....however in topicals i think its best if u got a stort to ur drop or a tale or messgae and you didnt really have this...i was feelin yours as more of a poetic drop...it lacked vivid imagery...you covered the topic well and stcuk to it...overall-8/10

Premanition
Tight vocab, and you used it in the right places where it was needed..you had a story to ur drop but would have like to see it develop more.....structuree was decent and ur drop flowed well...you had a nice ending line something to eflect on..you had a sick bar which sounded heavy and created gd imagery:
One goal apparent, pupil’s iris has surroundings in focus…
Uncommon situation wen eyes c things that brains not noticed…
^^i thought that was dope....a lil amount of emotion in ur piece..you stayed on topic most of th time with a few off top places...overall-9/10

no h8 final
RTF-links in sig.. Peace

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