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Old 01-06-05, 03:14 PM   #45
Acuity
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Voted For: Parallel

Vote: Paralell

Paralell
Mad wordplay in ur drop g, liked the way it flowed and i think i spootted sum multi flow gettin going in this....all i can say really is work on your structure..you had some creative punches that were original and not played..keep dis up overall - 8.5/10

50Cent
there was nothing wrong in your drop...except for the played as wordplay on wood not hitting back etc ur 2nd bar was not a punch you actuall agve him props...although overall it was a decent drop...work on more creative and original wordplay and punches.. overall 7/10

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