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Old 01-06-05, 05:24 PM   #9
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Thats A Pretty Dope Piece Mayn...
I Was Feeling The Storyline And Everything...
I Liked How You Had The Conversations Going And Kept A Nice Smooth Flow...
That Shit Was Trick...
You're Vocab Was Very Nice, Emotion Was Veeeeeeery Good...
Uuum, The Whole Verse Was Pretty Hot...
Only Thing Is Is That It Kinda Starts To Drone On...
Just Because You Dont Use Choruses, So Thats My Only Complaint...
Everything Else Was Dope To No Ends Homie, Stay Up...
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