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Knock out kings fur life
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IP:
DABA gets this one she had a better strucutre her topic scheme was good and she flowed better to help me understand it more.
Tell me why you call these super celeberties so great!!
They so rich, but still nothin to charity they donate..
O wait,They just have to much time for them selves,
To spend all of them wealth, and just time for others they got no space..
How about these ppl in need most, who u never notice..
U look down to like roaches, who's souls are so hopeless..
Thinkin u better all just cuz they all so homeless...
Thinkin u better cuz in life, they never did focus..
They just in need of more medicine, some are war veteran's..
These American's eat for dinner are only crumbs from small M & M's..
All they ever ask is to spare only a few change..
18.7/20
Government takin control having descretion not knowing whos on parol
The system workin for the oppression and not showing nation true goal
Societies lookin right at it but they dont even see
People unprotected sex getting herpes and HIV
White blood cells deminishing dont see needle injectin self sexually feeble
Women gettin prego...i aint talkin dressin they sleepin with too many people
Gun laws dropped Nra holiday...little kids getting heat killin accidental spray
Drive bys constantly running society policy so far away from the gunnin
Drugs are trafficin the streets giving ghetto child a job and somethin to eat
Coke misunderstood by society whether its powder or crak get black easily
Jails lockin dogs up like pound for sellin bones when their sentece shows murder...
Cant convict the guily only the innocent for lack of support and the bias jurror...
Tsunami hit foreign yet we still supply with out look at home front
17/20 u had a good strucutre also but it was hard for me to follow
vt/daba
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