Chief- your already in CS
50 hater- elevate and comeback also, don't put too many unneeded words in each line
convicted- elevate again change the structure up like this:

Tha Only Thing That Gives Me Tha Right To Stay What I Like Is Being In A Mic
A Chance To Speak Tha Mind /
Gotta Think Fast Befor I Go Blind/
Repeated Rap Self Concieted Crap/
2 Year Old Kiddies On A 40 Year Old Mans Lap/

and ^try to make them more even.........

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